tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1731201820936699850.post1061919522739419223..comments2023-08-05T23:05:03.418+09:00Comments on यात्राका ........सुस्केराहरु: गजलदिनेश राजhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08202193589171614071noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1731201820936699850.post-32455519268587660342009-07-20T05:54:59.224+09:002009-07-20T05:54:59.224+09:00a very nice gazal...a very nice gazal...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1731201820936699850.post-3478864912357449102009-06-28T04:18:19.478+09:002009-06-28T04:18:19.478+09:00nice gajalnice gajalप्रबिण थापाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17166883592843876373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1731201820936699850.post-11773521323246251542009-06-27T22:26:40.992+09:002009-06-27T22:26:40.992+09:00मिठो गजल!!!मिठो गजल!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04364989085004558211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1731201820936699850.post-37541921555583938602009-06-27T06:22:16.766+09:002009-06-27T06:22:16.766+09:00वाह दिनेशजी, सधै जस्तै यो पटक पनि शानदार गयो गज़ल ...वाह दिनेशजी, सधै जस्तै यो पटक पनि शानदार गयो गज़ल ,.... वजनदार छन् प्रत्येक सेरहरु । व्यंग्य खुब जमेको छ, शानदारमा टिक लगाइयो । :Dकृष्णपक्षhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11443226977236302372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1731201820936699850.post-55257332318470758862009-06-26T11:38:16.561+09:002009-06-26T11:38:16.561+09:00राम्रो छ गजलराम्रो छ गजलwordflowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11559130059420489484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1731201820936699850.post-69333699152451920312009-06-26T09:35:14.479+09:002009-06-26T09:35:14.479+09:00मिठो गजल दिनेशजी!मिठो गजल दिनेशजी!Basantahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00736262122360069167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1731201820936699850.post-44241911301854595842009-06-26T00:55:00.369+09:002009-06-26T00:55:00.369+09:00तपाईँको गजलमा तागत छ, काफीया सहज रूपले स्थापित छन्...तपाईँको गजलमा तागत छ, काफीया सहज रूपले स्थापित छन् सेरहरूमा । वैचारिक रूपमा त अब्बल छँदैछ, बान्की परेका छन् जम्मै सेर । तर मक्ता भने माथिल्ला सेर जस्तो उति नजमे जस्तो लाग्यो मिठासको हिसाबमा । तर झटारो चाहिँ यही सेरमा बढ्ता छ ।Jotare Dhaibahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16329491919485071804noreply@blogger.com